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Constructive Criticism Needed

162k spefyjerbf  7.7 years ago

I am trying something a little different, livery-wise. I'm going for a rescue/coast guard type of look. While this build is sill somewhat futuristic, I used different different styles to build the body of the aircraft. I also intend to add various details to the build to make it high quality.

You can take a look here.

Thanks to all!

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    162k spefyjerbf

    @EliteIndustries1 @Visify @ThatOnion Thanks for the help! I have finished the plane!

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    162k spefyjerbf

    @Tully2001 @MrSilverWolf @goboygo1 Many thanks for your help! I have finished the plane!

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    @spefyjerbf (too many rainbow ships! I agree!)

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    @spefyjerbf ok thanks!

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    162k spefyjerbf

    @MrSilverWolf Hm, I think doing what you think is right will serve you best. My only recommendation is not using excessively bright color schemes, and go easy on the color. I have seen too many rainbow-colored spaceships on this site lol. Also use beacon lights. They enhance the look immensely.

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    And I've always wanted to build a good looking spacecraft, any tips for starters?

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    @spefyjerbf oh ok cool!

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    162k spefyjerbf

    @MrSilverWolf Thanks! I have already beefed up the engine systems, and I plan on adding a tail cross or two.

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    And maybe another cross on the tail, and a few more details, but I do have to say it looks awesome!

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    The only thing wrong to me was the engines on the wings, it doesn't look quite finished and a bit off, and the cross at where the wing meats the fuselage, any way to get that flush, it looks like it sticks out a bit

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    28.3k goboygo1

    i couldn't find anything wrong, looks great.

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    162k spefyjerbf

    @EliteIndustries1 The landing gears were the last things that I added before posting it as unlisted. In hindsight, they were a little rushed. Thanks for the suggestion!

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    162k spefyjerbf

    @Visify Yeah, I was planning to add more to the wingtips. But I hadn't thought about the engines. Thanks for that suggestion!

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    22.6k Visify

    Maybe add a little detail to the engines on the wingtips. They look unfinished tbh.

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    162k spefyjerbf

    @ThatOnion Thanks! I will try to add some of those improvements.

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    1,762 ThatOnion

    Maybe make the cockpit wrap around the nose of the plane and make sure to paint it white around the canopy

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