@NoyaN Just from looking at the screenshots I can see the huge improvement. While you wait to upload it, add any details you feel it is missing, but remember not to go overboard. Too many details can look bad.

@KnightOfAraluen
@Flyboy360

Thanks friends i'm happy for your comments... your comments makes me more enthusiastic so i made my second car today its 4x4 and have suspensions and some interior details but still im a noob :p
I can't upload it now i should wait for tomorrow but i took its screenshots if you wonder it you can look it from these links ;

http://www.hizliresimyukle.com/image/P7qtR
http://www.hizliresimyukle.com/image/P7a8a
http://www.hizliresimyukle.com/image/P7glm
http://www.hizliresimyukle.com/image/P7BP7
http://www.hizliresimyukle.com/image/P7894
http://www.hizliresimyukle.com/image/P7i0e
http://www.hizliresimyukle.com/image/P7GAA

Thanks for helping KnightofAraulen i'm following u now if i have questions i will ask you
Sorry for my bad english

This is pretty good for being your car, and judging by your points, one of your first creations.

Instead of using groups to make the car move, just use an engine set to pitch for pc or vtol for mobile. This will make it able to move forwards with vtol up or the w key, and backwards with vtol down and the s key. Also, if you look at my cars (hopefully I dont sound like I am bragging) you will find an easy way to add curves to the sides or top. This will improve the look by a lot. Try to improve the proportions as well. This car is very long and skinny.If you could make in shorter, that would work. You could also just make it wider. I find that cars look good if their length is double the width. Small details on the inside like a radio, shifter, or steering wheel help a lot. My cars can also show you how to make an easy suspension system. While it isnt the best, it gets the job done. Try not to rely on the built in wheel suspension. It is very bouncy and can make cars hard to control. If you have any questions, just ask. I am happy to help.