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6 months and it was very quiet...

31.3k AircroftDesign  4.7 years ago

She half expected at lest a buzzing, everything had been left where it was almost like the workers had just vanished at there posts. This didnt seem right for a factory this advanced and new.

It had been 6 momths since the last Aircroft factory had shut. This didnt mean the company was gone they just moved location except one thing was slightly strange. No body knew where it was. Of course there were conspiracies about it. they couldnt keep pumping out new planes and products without a manufacturing facility to make them. However for the looters the last few factories to close were a gold mine.

People knew Aircroft had a habit of leaving valuble equipment behind they were too big to care if they left a few plasma welders or some of their EPSA power management equipment behind. Rival companies and scrap dealers would pay good money for that stuff.

She had looted Aircroft tech before briefly working for the company herself she knew the basic layout of the factories. If you knew one you knew them all. however there was something... off about this place every place she had been before had only basic power this place was fully wired up if she wanted to she could reboot everything that wasnt password protected.

Not that she cared she was here for one thing rumored to be left here. She crouched down to pick up what looked to be a welder of some sorts she noticed a light. It wasn't anything she wasnt expecting but it was enough to make her curious.

She descended the staircase which was deeper than expected. When she reached the bottom she couldn't belive her eyes.

A full production line full of tech she had never seen before and most bizzare of all not a person in sight. Robotic arms whirring away welders grazing a material shinier than anything she had seen shapes materialising out of thin air.

She felt a cold object press against her neck...

Just a story I wrote about aircroft being a more sinister company than it seemes on the surface useing a female scavenger searching through a recently decomissend aircroft factory and uncovering something she shouldn't have. This is my first short story.
Hope you liked it.

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    @ForeverPie Yh let's hope not eh whatever...
    It's just a rumour

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    101k Wallaby

    If this story ever hit the news your company goes kaput.

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    @GeneralPatrick2 I will tag u in my next story dw

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    @GeneralPatrick2 Yh i never have been good with grammer I failed English at school so I guess my writing shows that lol

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    @AircroftDesigin for a first attempt, this is a pretty dang good short story ngl. Only criticism I could give would be the few grammatical mistakes there are, but besides that this is pretty good! I hope to see some more of these in the future, feel free to tag me on any other stories you write and post here. I'd love that :D

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    @GeneralPatrick2 cheers it's my first attempt any criticism is greatly appreciated @DOX

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    first time i've seen a story on this website and i have to say it's making me very happy to see other writers on this website as well :D

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    Willy Wonka flashback intensifies

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    11.3k DOX

    nice writing !!

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    Woah role play intensifies

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