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Another teaser for my second book

1,249 Bobobobob  2.5 years ago

Prologue: (read in a deep tone) In the known universe there's only one Earth, but what if I told you there are more. There are an infinite number of universes but it is on Earth IX that the final showdown occurs. First lets see how our heroes are doing on Earth 1 now renamed Earth prime. Last time we left off with our heroes after they found a strange electric creature, but their story is just beginning.
Chapter one, book two: New Challengers Approach

Today we found an odd looking creature. It is bipedal and can also walk on all four paws? It has yellow fur, and a tail that looks like a lightning bolt. It looks human but we can't know for sure until we ask it the questions “what are you and what is your name”. When we asked the questions we were in between surprised and not surprised that it could, we just hoped no more come or that could be bad. Blaze and the B-17s ball turret gunner, luke “Neon” o’brian and I took the F6F Hellcats and robbie, peter, rainy, bob, and sylvester took a transport truck and the jeep willys we went back to the site where we found the(for context they are at pearl harbor not Midway) the electrifying creature we found that we don't have its name or were it came from so after we check the area its back to questions. Robbie, Peter, Rainy, Bob and Sylvester were searching for what seemed like hours on the ground while we searched the sky for anything like a rift so we could be ready incase anymore fell from the sky.

Just then something like 5 rifts opened and out came maybe 6 more of those creatures came out of nowhere and made us use evasive maneuvers to get out of the way. “Man this is getting way to crazy” I said over the radio “we need to get the creatures picked up fast because we have company” I yelled over the radio because 5 109’s came out of nowhere and attacked us we fought back and won so we headed back to pearl harbor and planed to return to Midway. We landed on the deck of the Zombie destroyer and got the creatures aboard and set off for Midway. We had to see if they could talk which none of them could except the yellow one so we gave it lukes nickname “Neon” so now we have a name we just need to know what he is so we asked what he was and the answer surprised me “SO YOUR A HU-”I yelled but I was cut of by robbie and Blaze when they came running when they heard me yell. I told them that the yellow creature says he's human and they were just as shocked. We wondered how this could be so we had our main engineer, Zack who we found at the base when we arrived, work on a “probe” like device that could be put into a rift and scan the environment so we can then send a manned exploration team in to see what's on the other side. Zack got the probe finished so now we need to go to the location where we found neon, then wait for a rift to open, then send the probe through.

I attached one of the probes (Zack made 5) to the spot a torpedo would go on the hellcat because it is perfect for the torpedo shaped probes then I hopped in and took off to look for a rift. I was flying for an hour when a rift formed right in front of my plane which I almost flew into but did not because I pulled up while dropping the torpedo and it went in. We waited a day or two for the environmental scans to arrive and when they did, we saw it was a breathable earth like planet. We sent an exploration team consisting of myself, Robbie, and peter. We climbed into the TBM Avenger and flew into a newly formed rift and when we were on the other side we did see an Earth like world like the scans said but it was different.

The buildings did not look man made. What I mean by that is they don’t look like human architecture. We flew for what seemed like forever before we found a flat field to land in. We got the rifles out and looked around for a road and when we did find one we realized it was around 3 miles away so we started walking and it took us an hour and a half to make it to the road. When we got there we heard something walking along the road so we hid behind a large bush to stay out of sight. My rifle has a sniper's scope so I put the gun through the bush to where I can see them but they can't see us. Then I saw that the thing was the same kind of creature we have back at base in the other universe.

It did not see us which is good. We let it get some distance away from us and we followed while crouching along the field side of the road. We eventually got to the point where we had to come out of hiding. We made sure to stay back and stay quiet. We eventually saw a town or city so we hid behind some bushes in between two buildings. I took the scope of my rifle to use as a spyglass and I saw what looked like the town center. We saw a better vantage point on top of a small hill so I decided to make my way over to the hill. I had to run then hide, then run then hide, I had to do that 4 times until I eventually made it to the hill.

I went behind the hill then climbed it to the point where I can see them but yet they can’t see me. I looked over towards the center and saw more strange looking creatures so I got off the hill and told my crew to head back to the Avenger. When we got back I noticed that the fuel gauge said half a tank of fuel. We flew over the city and my radio man looked out over the mystery town and said let's try to go back. I only went because we were low on fuel and right when we got to where the rift that brought us here reopened. We went through and popped out back at base so we landed but then I asked for two F6F’s to be refueled and armed with 2 1000 lb bombs and 8 rockets.

While they were doing that, I went to get Blaze because he was gonna go with me. So we strap into the hellcats and set off into the rift, a rift that's in the sky that only humans can traverse “intact” so the creatures who we still don't know what they are can not traverse them a second time, only once. We made it to the other side and again Blaze did a barrel roll(he really likes doing those for some reason) as soon as we emerged from the rift. We flew to the city and circled the “city” at around 2000 ft. Luckily it was night and “thank god for the cover of night” I said “no one should be able to see us” (spoiler alert someone did see us) so we flew off but just for a second. We then flew back to the rift while banking to the left then to the point where I was upside down to get a better look at the city. Once I got a good look I rolled back to where my plane usually flies.

We got back and the yellow one finally said the name of the species they are called pokemon? Whatever that is doesn't matter what does is figuring out what to do with all the new rifts opening. I hop in the pilots seat of the SBD and Blaze hops in the radio- gunners seat and we took of to see what we could find when Blaze spots 2 moving shapes below us moving on foot so I said “radio the base and tell them to get the transport truck and jeep out here” which he did and they made it the 5-10 minutes it took to get here we watched them stop and comply with the orders they are being giving. We rendezvous back at the base and check in with our new guests when a rift right at the end of the runway opens and out came 2 giant metal robots that transformed into cars “weird well back to work i’ll check them out in a minute” I thought to myself so I asked Rainy and Blaze to go check in on them. I went to the “questions room” to question our new guests “if anymore show up anymore I am going to be very angry” I thought.

They said they were also humans which made no sense so I did what I thought would make sense of the situation, I asked them their names. They said their names are Austin and Alyssa so thank god we got that over, now I can go and check on our new guests. From what Blaze and Rainy got from them is that they are robots from another planet called cybertron and they are called transformers.

Chapter two Book two: New Discoveries

I just now noticed a decline in zombie activity to practically zero at this point. Now I wonder where all of the zombies disappeared two so I chose someone to go with me in the SBD and someone in an F6F. Of course I would choose Blaze and Rainy i also chose peter to also fly in an F6F and once the planes were refueled(incase you were wondering where all the fuel comes well when fuels needed I just add more to the story)and rearmed we climbed in and took off again. We flew to a new rift to see what was in there so I threw a probe in(little bit of context here but essentially Zack made handheld probes) and we flew off to a new one and we managed to do 5 rifts before we ran low on fuel. We turned back and looked at what we got so far which is the same as last time, breathable atmosphere, grass and foliage, rocks, mountains, etc and it's on all of them. I called Blaze, Rainy, and Peter in the hanger area of the carrier and told them to get strapped into the planes. I told Blaze and Rainy to hop in the F6F’s and Peter and will be in the SBD dauntless and we flew into another rift.

We finally made it to the other side and immediately found a place to land… except we have to fly over a city and its day so everyones going to see well ok because I ain't going to strafe a city. I looked down and saw a cloaked figure standing there but I wasn't sure if it was him so I pulled my binoculars out to get a closer look and It had the same features that everyone else described. He had a tail and was flying which explains how the rift we went through got that high up in the air. We landed and grabbed the standard gear for us: one flask, a rifle with extra ammo, some emergency rations(we each get our own which is enough us to last a month if needed), a backpack to store stuff in, a blanket, a and a flare gun and flare bullets.

“It's a good thing I made a storage area in the tail of the plane” I thought to myself as I was grabbing my stuff from the hatch and after we put our stuff in the packs we headed off for the nearest civilization If there is any. We decided to look for a road so we searched the perimeter of the very big field, bigger than the last one. After about an hour of searching we finally found a road which we hope will lead us to the city we saw before and hopefully we can find the mysterious cloaked figure. Meanwhile… Back at Earth prime the rest of the gang are dealing with a whole lot of problems, they were having trouble feeding the colorful creatures so they set up a schedule for different times to feed them, like a small group eats then another until they all get something to eat. Now back to me and my crew(the exploration team), We finally reached the city and we did what we did last time, hide and observe the city folk. We saw the same kind of creatures like the ones back at home base and the other world.

We see one walking down the road we walked next to to get here, it was the cloaked figure we saw before we landed. It went into the city so I used my binoculars to track it but it disappeared into a crowd so I army crawled my way to a new spot and observed from there and I actually found the cloaked figure again. The figure was heading out of the town and into a heavily forested area which we followed it into. We then followed quietly to see where it was going which was a little hut deep in the forest. We went up to the house and I knocked on the door, it answered and invited us in. It was the creature that brought my crew,the felinians, the robots, and the pokemon to Earth prime. The creature told us it is a mew, whatever that is and told us why it brought us to Earth prime, to stop a great evil.
Chapter three Book two: TACTICAL “ANYTHING” INCOMING

It told us that evil will come when we least expect it, not like it already put us in danger. Well we got going because it was night and we had a chance to sneak into the city and see what's going on here. We snuck in and we had our rifles raised as we walked through the streets of this unknown city. We didn't realize it until later but we were spotted by one of the creatures. We kept moving through the city which was like a suburban town, yet it looked like medieval times and It was weird if I do say so myself.

So today we found 5 unexploded Fat Man A-Bombs(short for Atomic bomb) so we carefully brought them back to base. When we got them back to base we made sure to store them safely in a bunker and after Zack gave me an idea, he used to play a game called MW2 and in the game there is a Nuke and when it drops someone says “TACTICAL NUKE INCOMING” then the game ends. So from now on I will say “TACTICAL insert object here INCOMING'' but for now we are going to get some sleep.

Well it's the next day and we heard sounds from the woods we slept in so we grabbed the rifles and checked out the area the sounds came from. We are close enough to the town we found that they would be able to hear gunshots so we need to be careful. Rainy heard a noise and fired in that direction but he missed and the round struck a tree and now the town knows we are here so we have to keep moving. We saw two pokemon walking down a road probably looking for us so we hid behind some bushes until they left, but they did not leave and just stood there.

We took matters into our own hands, Blaze and I snuck up behind them and pulled them behind the bushes and we asked them if they could talk, which they could. We asked them where we were and they said we were in the pokemon world and they said they heard loud noises coming from the woods and decided to investigate. Tomorrow we set out back to the planes.

To make our way back to the planes we had to leave under the cover of dark and we had to walk back through the town. We managed to get back just before sunrise and took off back into the rift and we headed home. When we got back we found out that we found an avro lancaster, a british bomber, a bomber that can carry the fat man. So we got a crew ready, and set off for germany. We got to germany and dropped the bomb on a non populated peice of land the germans have. We did this to stop Germany from attacking us and our unusual allies. We returned to base, got refueled and armed with 230 4lb incendiary bombs and some chaff then we prepared to go into the rift where we encountered some pretty violent and volitile creatures(more on that soon)so we are going to bomb them.

We packed food, water, guns(just in case), and flak jackets(also just in case). Same world just a different location so I had my official navigator, Rainy plot a course for the nearest rift.

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    1,249 Bobobobob

    https://www.deviantart.com/rslashh/art/Book-two-teaser-918055153 and the second book has a picture of a plane in the SP designer.

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    1,249 Bobobobob

    I don't have one here I will give you the link

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    Actually, what’s your pfp

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    @bobobobob I can’t find you

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    1,249 Bobobobob

    @Mlancer thanks I will and my deviant art username is Rslash or just search up the space between on the site

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    And remember run on sentences, like this:
    “So I hopped in the F6F and flew around a bit then I had been flying for an hour…..”
    Also remember pacing, and breaking up the sentences. If you do that then your story is going to be AMAZING
    Edit: The book Night witches is a good example of immersion and punctuation.

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    @bobobobob
    Yes, do you have a link to the story?

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    1,249 Bobobobob

    @Mlancer thank you so so like the book so far

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    Amazing.

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    1,249 Bobobobob

    I posted this on devient art and in 3 days it already has over 4,000 views

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    1,249 Bobobobob

    @Mlancer so how am I doing so far?

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    Daaaaaaang

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