@Sadboye12 the Echostar is an allegory to me now. Even it's name... "Echo" and "star"
A repeating thing shining as bright as stars do is... It's emotional.
Which is why I want to see people's versions. I don't care how bad or good. This is an invitation to anyone reading. Make a twin booms plane that is meant to do one thing, show your emotion.
@SuperSuperTheSylph good to know people like you exist.
But I must reiterate. I honestly did get what I deserved and I accept that. I feel like I have wronged a few people and want to right those faults and come out better. This post was one reason why. It serves as a solid explanation to everyone.
Still, tysm for the positivity, I appreciate you for that.
@Graingy Also, what are you? a fricking readaholic? You basically never actually see my posts planes and stuff 💀
(This is me telling you to go see what I posted. Fits with you being a readaholic too)
@RX9115S
Right, after a bit of consideration I'll say that yes, the thing can fly. It just doesn't like pulls... which isn't the best thing for a fighter, but to be fair, that's more forgivable than "It can't fly", so my bad on that one I suppose. I do still think further refinement would make it better since most users will likely just put the pitch full down on take off or do aggressive turns since most of us will likely use WASD or the joystick on phone not very carefully. All it really needs is more tuning on AOA limiter if one already exists (Pretty simple input code, let me know if you want to know how that works). But that being said, It's atleast good to know that you did test it a lot and after thinking about it, this does feel ALRIGHT to let out but you'd definitely do yourself one better if you make it literally FOOL PROOF.
About the playset, once again, it's a good idea, but when you load this thing on the airport, it interferes with a normal take-off. What do I suggest? keep this as is, just lower the heights of the stands so that it doesn't actually collide with the thing, because let's be fair, not everyone will bother to take that initiative and actually remove or delete them. For people playing, usually it is just download and fly. And I'm well aware that you made it clear it's a play set, yes, I just would've liked it if I can just download and go... maybe read some instructions about how to start it up if it's a complex build.
About not using variables; You don't need that for screens, but I got your point. I agree with you on wanting to keep it simple and take that back, then there's also the argument of how the thing is technically a model only as well... so yeah. That's a full case closed unless you think you want to add some basic speed displays and stuff. I'll be here to help with that
TL;DR in case your in a hurry :
Response noted, I agree to the response about overcomplication, think that the playset should be adjusted in a way that is accessible and doesn't hinder the "Download and go" expectation, also think that the thing on second thought flies pretty great if you learn, but kind of hard to learn when the thing can't take-off without flipping (Unless you be gentle with it). Also suggest AOA limiters.
Good to know you actually took the criticism seriously even though some points seemed a little obvious at first though!
@Graingy Good writing, bad clarity. It lost my attention halfway through; I'll still read what I have left but that was my immediate first impression. There seems to be a good amount of unclarified exposition early on and it does seem to later pickup, showing more stakes and making the dangers clear... But that's at-least 2 or 3 paragraphs in...
Fix? Start the entire thing with a few very powerful words that encapsulate what is about to happen.
Good riddance, old friend. I'm glad I got to compete against you to make the fastest possible cars in slow-mo mode and had a life changing time with you realizing people could love me for what I am. It's great to know that Pio's sidekick is fixing his life so much now...
I hope you've been enjoying Flyout, It's pretty cool!
Much love, Cerdd! <3
@Sadboye12 the Echostar is an allegory to me now. Even it's name... "Echo" and "star"
+1A repeating thing shining as bright as stars do is... It's emotional.
Which is why I want to see people's versions. I don't care how bad or good. This is an invitation to anyone reading. Make a twin booms plane that is meant to do one thing, show your emotion.
@Sadboye12
+1How come?
Noone else could figure it out. How did you figure it out?
@TTL Das Kwite awright m8 ye dont need ta warreh!
+1@SuperSuperTheSylph 80 ping is like a godsend for me.
+1@SuperSuperTheSylph Eheheheheheh(Click)
+1@BaconEggs oh wow that is actually a very good suggestion
+1@Dracul0Anderson did so and yes, I'd love to see what you're cooking up.
+1@Dracul0Anderson well, Spefyjerbf and Guyfolk!
+1@SuperSuperTheSylph I am pretty alright. Sending best wishes to you and your family. Also, cool stuff with your builds!
+1@Graingy ...someone who loves reading?
+1No...? Okay.
@SuperSuperTheSylph good to know people like you exist.
+1But I must reiterate. I honestly did get what I deserved and I accept that. I feel like I have wronged a few people and want to right those faults and come out better. This post was one reason why. It serves as a solid explanation to everyone.
Still, tysm for the positivity, I appreciate you for that.
@Graingy Also, what are you? a fricking readaholic? You basically never actually see my posts planes and stuff 💀
+1(This is me telling you to go see what I posted. Fits with you being a readaholic too)
@Graingy Fair enough dude.
+1@Cerdd thank you!
+1:D
@RX9115S
Right, after a bit of consideration I'll say that yes, the thing can fly. It just doesn't like pulls... which isn't the best thing for a fighter, but to be fair, that's more forgivable than "It can't fly", so my bad on that one I suppose. I do still think further refinement would make it better since most users will likely just put the pitch full down on take off or do aggressive turns since most of us will likely use WASD or the joystick on phone not very carefully. All it really needs is more tuning on AOA limiter if one already exists (Pretty simple input code, let me know if you want to know how that works). But that being said, It's atleast good to know that you did test it a lot and after thinking about it, this does feel ALRIGHT to let out but you'd definitely do yourself one better if you make it literally FOOL PROOF.
About the playset, once again, it's a good idea, but when you load this thing on the airport, it interferes with a normal take-off. What do I suggest? keep this as is, just lower the heights of the stands so that it doesn't actually collide with the thing, because let's be fair, not everyone will bother to take that initiative and actually remove or delete them. For people playing, usually it is just download and fly. And I'm well aware that you made it clear it's a play set, yes, I just would've liked it if I can just download and go... maybe read some instructions about how to start it up if it's a complex build.
About not using variables; You don't need that for screens, but I got your point. I agree with you on wanting to keep it simple and take that back, then there's also the argument of how the thing is technically a model only as well... so yeah. That's a full case closed unless you think you want to add some basic speed displays and stuff. I'll be here to help with that
TL;DR in case your in a hurry :
Response noted, I agree to the response about overcomplication, think that the playset should be adjusted in a way that is accessible and doesn't hinder the "Download and go" expectation, also think that the thing on second thought flies pretty great if you learn, but kind of hard to learn when the thing can't take-off without flipping (Unless you be gentle with it). Also suggest AOA limiters.
Good to know you actually took the criticism seriously even though some points seemed a little obvious at first though!
+1Jesus christ bro that's way too much braindead fuselage placing xD
+1@cruiseman101 Oh god... God bless you. Hope the surgery goes well and FOR THE RECORD... I was joking xD
Take care of yourself though, really!
+1What the hell?
+1@cruiseman101 This is good stuff, now actually become a tesla competitor and give this thing an entire design and interior
+1@Crazyplaness
+1@MA2211C
Thank u!!!!!!
@BYardley thank you!
+1@MA2211c fr it does. Might make yacht some day 😂
+1Thanks for the updoot!
@Marulk
+1@Kerbango
@RB2h
Thank you for the upvotes!
@MIGFOXHOUND31BSM26 Always a pleasure, kind sir 😊
+1@F16xl
+1@byardley
@126
@VarisOnAviation Oh. Cool stuff!
+1This is some beautiful body work man. Love it.
+1Oh we are so in this man.
T
+1@LJh1 Vroom Technology :D
+1I didn't expect another bus so soon XD
+1@WritersCrusadersAirCo2 thank you :)
+1@ChaseplaneKLWith1MG You still goin strong, comrade?
+1@126
+1@LJh1
@jamesPLANESii
@LJh1 Cool car and cool name. Take my updoots
+1@WisconsinStatePolice Kindle Direct Publishing.
+1@ComradeSandman Agreed. Gonna keep that in mind for later chapters
+1@Graingy Good writing, bad clarity. It lost my attention halfway through; I'll still read what I have left but that was my immediate first impression. There seems to be a good amount of unclarified exposition early on and it does seem to later pickup, showing more stakes and making the dangers clear... But that's at-least 2 or 3 paragraphs in...
Fix? Start the entire thing with a few very powerful words that encapsulate what is about to happen.
+1@Graingy used to be but a tiny particle in sand
+1@Graingy I used to be a martian at some point
+1@Graingy mhm. Very fun being in meat hoarded buses, I tell ya.
+1@Graingy junior college, India.
+1College starts at 16 for us in mumbai
@Graingy I saw the first paragraph and I think the writing is well done.
+1@Graingy just returning from college. Will get back to you in around an hour or so.
+1@Graingy sure
+1@Graingy I don't know I just ended up typing away
+1@ComradeSandman No, really. I started at 11 in the morning then finished at 1am at night. I was really compassionate in those moments lol
+1@ThomasRoderick had a nice chuckle at that one
+1@ThomasRoderick what the fuck tom...
+1Good riddance, old friend. I'm glad I got to compete against you to make the fastest possible cars in slow-mo mode and had a life changing time with you realizing people could love me for what I am. It's great to know that Pio's sidekick is fixing his life so much now...
I hope you've been enjoying Flyout, It's pretty cool!
+1Much love, Cerdd! <3
@AluminiumFX Like you, friend. Thanks for the upvote!
+1